Fairy Tale?!

Well for having the curage and skill of writing a short fairy tale in english you deserve to get my critic written in the very same language. First of all this story resembles much of your other two and affirms my first impressions, that these stories might have something to do with the author. In fact they seem to reflect a very important part of both your history and personality.
It is shocking and fills me with sadness to read that you had to experience such dispiriting situations, but let me tell you. Live goes on! I am most assured, that you yourself are not the sad, introverted personality you describe in your stories, moreover I am convinced that you yourself can be a laughin, charming and wonderfull personality people will adore! You can not let yourself pull under. Everyone of us had to experience a disdained love, but nevertheless we keep on going, searching for the one person, touching our heart like in the first day we fell in love. Love is such bittersweet experience, we long for every day. It hurts us and makes us small defines us to be what we are.. the outcome does not matter, for everyone of us can find true hapiness. Some very early.. some very late!

Oh I would like to add, that I myself am very curious of what the person answered. Might you share the answer with us?

oh man, das ist ja fast die Version, die du mir per Msn in Deutsch geschrieben hast... aber obwohl es englisch war(ich bin stolz auf mich) habe ich es wirklich verstanden.
Hat ER es den gelesen?
Ich mag jetzt keinen Namen nennen, aber ich kann ungefähr verstehen, wie du dich fühlst, mir geht es da ja nicht unbedingt so anders. Nur dass ich noch die Möglichkeit habe den Fehler nicht zu machen.
HDL -^^-
und cheer up ;)

-sigh- Very emotional.
... aber ich ziehe es vor, meinen Kommentar auf Deutsch zu verfassen.
Ich mag die Art, wie du schreibst. Englisch scheint dir, trotz einiger kleiner Fehler, wirklich zu liegen. Du schreibst sicher und drückst dich gut aus. Und wie bereits gesagt, sehr emotional.