Kairaishi: Meister der Marionetten
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wooow *-*
echt hammer...
tolle idee für einen doji und suuuper gezeichnet^^
echt...
respekt^^
echt hammer...
tolle idee für einen doji und suuuper gezeichnet^^
echt...
respekt^^
I've meant questiOn XD
and i'ved misst an H (witH)
And I forgott the "?" two times but I hope you know where they should stand ^^°
if not I'll correct it:"Wie geht es jetzt weiter?" (that means something like"how this will go on now ?" ) or "was machen wir jetzt?"( means what will we do now ? ")
I really hope that you can understand my bad english ^^°
and i'ved misst an H (witH)
And I forgott the "?" two times but I hope you know where they should stand ^^°
if not I'll correct it:"Wie geht es jetzt weiter?" (that means something like"how this will go on now ?" ) or "was machen wir jetzt?"( means what will we do now ? ")
I really hope that you can understand my bad english ^^°
I've got a questin, what do you want to say wit "wie gehen wir jetzt weiter" do you mean it like how will we walk on? because that's what it sounds like.
if you want to say : "How will we go on now" or "what will we do now"
I think it would sound better to say something like: "Wie geht es jetzt weiter?" (that means something like"how this will go on now") or "was machen wir jetzt?"( means what will we do now")
I think tose both would fit well ^^
if you want to say : "How will we go on now" or "what will we do now"
I think it would sound better to say something like: "Wie geht es jetzt weiter?" (that means something like"how this will go on now") or "was machen wir jetzt?"( means what will we do now")
I think tose both would fit well ^^
hi ^^
I was really surprised about your good german ^^
till now I've just found one mistake
you've written "Diese Symbiose werde tötlich für dich sein!"
but the sentence has to be "Diese Symbiose wird tötlich für dich sein!"
so the mistake is "werde"
but i think it's no big mistake ^^
so be proud of your good german,because I suppose that it's hard to learn our language ^^
(I hope you can understand my bad english ^^°)
I was really surprised about your good german ^^
till now I've just found one mistake
you've written "Diese Symbiose werde tötlich für dich sein!"
but the sentence has to be "Diese Symbiose wird tötlich für dich sein!"
so the mistake is "werde"
but i think it's no big mistake ^^
so be proud of your good german,because I suppose that it's hard to learn our language ^^
(I hope you can understand my bad english ^^°)
Von: abgemeldet
It's an grat Doujinshi *____*
*gg*
I liked it, too.
*gg*
I liked it, too.
great!!!
i like your Dojinshi^^
you have a good style of drawing
and the story is fantastic XD
i like your Dojinshi^^
you have a good style of drawing
and the story is fantastic XD
What? Why it is so short? It is soooooooo good, I like it verry mutch but to short.
Von: abgemeldet
it was so... beautiful! really! i enjoyed reading.
yeah, just luv it!!!!!!!! :D
yeah, just luv it!!!!!!!! :D
ehm also ganz spitze und das du nict so ut deusth kannst merkt man nicht xD
nur bei seite 10 das letzte panel heist ::tödlich FÜR DICH :::
weil die symtome nicht tödlich handln können denk ich ......
also das es durch :zu dir: personifiziert wird ...
egal xD jedenfalss sagt man da :für dich:
sonsttt alles <3
nur bei seite 10 das letzte panel heist ::tödlich FÜR DICH :::
weil die symtome nicht tödlich handln können denk ich ......
also das es durch :zu dir: personifiziert wird ...
egal xD jedenfalss sagt man da :für dich:
sonsttt alles <3